Feel like swimming
With all my friends
Till the day's done
Cause summer doesn't end
Summer of Twenty 10
Playing until the end
Cause summer never ends
When you're with all your friends
Dogs are panting
Fruit is harvesting
Birds are chirping
Ducks are quacking
And once the day has ended.
We all hop into bed
And wake up for more summer
Cause summer never ends!
breath taking poem Luke. I FEEL LIKE GOING FOR A SWIM!
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ReplyDeleteGREAT WORK FROM MR UNKNOWN
ReplyDeletemaybe a hit poem some day
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you wrote your poem about summer
ReplyDeleteit was cool how it sounded like a half poem half song so ten stars to u Luke!
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